Multiple Created Horses

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Registered Name: Miss Direction
Nickname: Miss
Age: 2
Breed: Thoroughbred
Colour & Markings: Grey/Blaze w/ pink snip
Height: 15.0
Gender: Mare
Personality: She is usually a shy horse, and gets a bit nervous in crowds. But, she has a rather unique personality, she also greets newcomers and tends to be the wisest out of the group. She always pokes her head out to greet people walking by and see if they have something for her. Which, of course most people do. She is very loving and besides her shyness she is still ready and focused on race day. She likes to stay in the pack and then drive away to the front.
Pedigree: Created X Created

Racing Info: ...
Race Record: [0-0-0-0]
Workout/Training Post:

Dirt: Good
Turf: Great
Distance: 9-12 (More of a stamina horse)
Leg Type: Mid
Racing Results: ...





Registered Name: Trickery Affirmed
Nickname: Trickery
Age: 2
Breed: Thoroughbred
Colour & Markings: Bay/Broken blaze
Height: 15.2
Gender: Stallion
Personality: He likes to show off a lot! Especially in front of the mares and crowd. He absolutely adores extra attention and he likes eyes solely on him. On the track he is competitive staying at the front and driving off any opponents. Although he is much more of a speed horse, he prefers at least a length ahead of the others. He loves to play tricks on his handlers and owners. He grabs the hose and sprays down his owners, and his other trick is to snag away the curry comb from his handler and play 'catch me if you can'.
Pedigree: Created X Created

Race Record: ...
Workout/Training Posts:
Dirt: Good
Turf: Great
Distance: 6-9
Leg Type: Front
Racing Results: ...



Registered Name: Simple BadBoi
Nickname: Smoothie
Age: 2
Breed: Thoroughbred
Colour & Markings: Chestnut/star
Height: 15.3
Gender: Stallion
Personality: A collected stallion at most, but he can be mean if he chooses to do so. He has a great personality and loves to greet people and horses. He loves to rear after a race or in the pasture, depending on his energy. He is also very intelligent, you can expect him to stay in his stall but nope you'll find him with his buddies. He is VERY competitive and likes to surprise his opponents and wow the crowd. He comes fast from behind and drives to the front in an instant.
Pedigree: Created X Created

Race Record: ...
Workout/Training Posts:
Dirt: Great
Turf: Great
Distance: 7-10
Leg Type: Proceder
Racing Results: ...



Registered Name: The Finest Cashmere
Nic : Cashmere
Age: 2
Breed: Thoroughbred
Colour & Markings: Sorrel/blaze
Height: 15.3
Gender: Mare
Personality: She is a determined mare and ready for anything. She loves to be the center of attention and likes to race the other horses in her pasture. She is very competitive and likes to stay in the front and tire out her opponents by urging them on. She constantly teases the other horses, nipping their manes and tails.
Pedigree: Created X Created

Race Record: ...
Workout/Training Posts:
Dirt: Good
Turf: Great
Distance: 5-8
Leg Type; Front
Racing Results:

[S u N f r O s t ~]

Hey, welcome to GHF Just a note on your creates.

You want to make sure that all of them are Great on one surface. Miss Direction should be Great on turf and The Finest Cashmere could be Great on both surfaces if you want, as you're allowed to create 1 dual surface horse per GHF year.

You will also want to make sure you go more into detail with their personalities. Visit other members' stable sites to get an idea of the kind of detail we want to see in races.

Once those changes are made, your creates will be accepted. If you need any help feel free to PM any active members and we'll be happy to help you out. Once again, welcome to GHF!

[S u N f r O s t ~]

Okay, now we just need to work on the heights

There are 4 inches in 1 hand. Therefore, heights like 16.5 and 17.5 are impossible to have Put your height between 14.3 and 17hh, maximum 17.2hh.

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^{Your horses, Trickery, Smoothie, and Cashmere have wrong heights. You can't create a horse over 17 hands high unless you have a trivia prize and horse heights go like this for example; 15.0, 15.1, 15.2, 15.3, 16.0, 16.1, 16.2, 16.3, 17.0. There is no such thing as a 16.5 hand horse or a 17.5 hand horse. Once you fix this I believe you'll be accepted}

[S u N f r O s t ~]

Now your horses are too short...I recommend that you do a bit of research on horse heights and then try to fix them again I may not be explaining properly.

[S u N f r O s t ~]

All right, they look good! Accepted! Go ahead and post them on your stable now. Don't forget to elaborate even more on their personalities if you can. Even better, elaborate on their racing styles. Go find some races for them to enter and do some workout posts with them to prepare.

Good luck! If you need more help just post in the cbox or PM a member. If you want more help with getting your horses ready to go, you can post them for an evaluation in the Evaluation board